2021年10月16雅思大作文題目

Some people think financial aid from international organizations is important for developing countries. Others believe that practical aid and advice is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

高分范文及解析

（交代背景）It is fortunate that in the modern era many international organizations exist to aid developing countries.

（復(fù)述題目）Yet some debate exists over whether aid should be given in the form of financial support or through practical aid and advice.

（作者立場）I am of the opinion that practical aid and advice is far more beneficial to developing countries in the long run than simply giving parcels of monetary support.

（讓步）I concede that financial aid can be tremendously beneficial to developing nations in certain circumstances. For instance, some countries lack necessary resources in order to build vital infrastructure. Only through the purchase of industrial capital such as machinery and raw materials can such countries improve their conditions, but such purchases require large sums of money. International organizations can donate money or offer special loans in order to facilitate these purchases and aid a nation’s development.

（轉(zhuǎn)折）Yet this is only a very short term solution, for after acquiring the raw materials tremendous expertise is required to maintain such systems so that they do not fall into disrepair. Thus, financial is not necessarily more important than practical aid and advice.

（作者立場論證）There are many ways in which practical aid and advice is superior to mere financial support. Advisors from more developed nations can teach at schools and universities in order to spread expert knowledge to people in a developing country so that a sustainable base of professionals can be established. Furthermore, practical aid in the form of establishing business relationships and supply chains may strengthen a developing country’s ability to become self-reliant and grow independent of financial support. Finally, practical aid and advice is less likely to be squandered and exploited as financial aid is in some less developed countries that may have corruption.

（復(fù)述作者立場&總結(jié)分論點(diǎn)）Ultimately, when international organizations give money to developing nations as a form of aid, it is merely a temporary bandage on a much larger issue, which is the lack of vital knowledge and infrastructure.

（總結(jié)分論點(diǎn)）Aid in the form of teaching and improving practical areas of a country’s economy is a more beneficial form of aid.